词汇与语法

thought

抽象名词 不可数

所以 a rational thought 中 不要加 a

seize

British police seized all the items in an operation that March.

注意 historic 与historical的区别

rical 表示 有历史意义的

ric 表示 历史的 历史事实相关之类的

翻译

地道的享受

a real treat

改错

for this occasion（开头）

for 改为 on

on this occasion 这一次

eg.

Well, sadly, on this occasion it was not a correct guess.
好吧，很遗憾，这次没猜对。

we were driving alone.

alone 改为 alone 这里并不是“we” 与 “alone” 相矛盾

along： 向前 going forward 向前

  • I was driving along, thinking about Chris.

    我一边开车，一边想着克里斯。

  • a group of children walking along in a line

排着队向前走的一群孩子

It was pretty scary, and we were lucky and none of us got hurt.

and 改为 but 后面的lucky 与前面的scary 形成语义转折关系

It was so frightening that I will never forget.

forget 后面加一个it 因为 that 前面不做形式宾语 不然 forget what？？？

作文

Never forget the hard lives before, because only with the inspiration of these memories can we go farther in the ever-changeable future.